So a while ago i uploaded a rough cut of my final project on youtube.
This is the final cut of that project [link] I'm still not satisfied but I have learnt from it. I wanted to deal with an abstract story and a sifferent/strange/weird style.. I don't know if that's a good thing.
Heeyy there 7aamed I haven't read the previous journals or saw the previous cuts but this one seems to be amaazzing! for some reason I really loved it. The eye movements with the closeups were a "trademark" stamp that it was done by you! The movie seems to be abstract in a sense that makes you think and be more curious and maybe even each person can have their own view of the story, but its not too abstract that you can get the main idea and the audience can see and perhaps live the unspoken "agony" of the character. i know i wrote a lot but little cant be just said about that movie
Did i get it right? the concept about loosing sight?
Wish you all the best. A fan of your art. Allah ywafgk
hey Fatma! Yes you're right. Or.. maybe it's about losing his imagination and creativity? lol jk just trying to sound like a smart-ass. I'm really glad you liked it >.< I'm not really satisfied with it. It's not quite what I wanted to do but Inshallah soon I'll shoot other short films. Thank you so much again and your words have just made my day : )
هممم ماشاءالله الفيلم بعد التعديل افضل بوااااااايد من اللي طاف الفكره بالنسبة لي الحين مفهومة أكثر و تمثيل الولد مقنع اكثر عن قبل حبيت تصويرك للمشاهد يوم انه ما يشوف بطريقة واضحه ماعرف شو يسمونه بس هو شرا البوكيه ، لاكن كررت الشي وايد مع ذلك هالشي ما يقلل من روعة الفيلم بعد التعديل، و بعد الشي اللي حبيته التأثير الصوتي و خصوصا يوم ضرب الشيره و طلع الصوت بوووم لفت انتباهي و شدني اكثر . .
I'm glad you like it Aysha! 7awalt ene a5ale el story shwai clear lena fel class ma7ad fham ella 4 - 5 students.. bs halle knt abah.. knt aba asawe shai 3'areb o mob mafhom bs ndamt.. hehe I appreciate your support thanks
I haven't read the previous journals or saw the previous cuts but this one seems to be amaazzing! for some reason I really loved it. The eye movements with the closeups were a "trademark" stamp that it was done by you! The movie seems to be abstract in a sense that makes you think and be more curious and maybe even each person can have their own view of the story, but its not too abstract that you can get the main idea and the audience can see and perhaps live the unspoken "agony" of the character. i know i wrote a lot but little cant be just said about that movie
Did i get it right? the concept about loosing sight?
Wish you all the best. A fan of your art. Allah ywafgk
Yes you're right. Or.. maybe it's about losing his imagination and creativity? lol jk just trying to sound like a smart-ass.
I'm really glad you liked it >.< I'm not really satisfied with it. It's not quite what I wanted to do but Inshallah soon I'll shoot other short films. Thank you so much again and your words have just made my day : )
هممم ماشاءالله الفيلم بعد التعديل افضل بوااااااايد من اللي طاف
الفكره بالنسبة لي الحين مفهومة أكثر و تمثيل الولد مقنع اكثر عن قبل
حبيت تصويرك للمشاهد يوم انه ما يشوف بطريقة واضحه ماعرف شو يسمونه بس هو شرا البوكيه ، لاكن كررت الشي وايد مع ذلك هالشي ما يقلل من روعة الفيلم بعد التعديل، و بعد الشي اللي حبيته التأثير الصوتي و خصوصا يوم ضرب الشيره و طلع الصوت بوووم لفت انتباهي و شدني اكثر
موفق يا حامد
مبدع و متألق كالعادة
I'm glad you like it Aysha! 7awalt ene a5ale el story shwai clear lena fel class ma7ad fham ella 4 - 5 students.. bs halle knt abah.. knt aba asawe shai 3'areb o mob mafhom bs ndamt.. hehe
I appreciate your support
همم فاهمتنك كنت تبى شي يكون غريب و يحتاج اشوي لتفكير و تامل عسب يوصلون للفكره، عموما ً اهم شي انك وصلت لنتيجة انت راضي عنها، استمر يا فنان